考研英语作文必背(1)
Directions1
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the two pictures,
2. interpret their meaning, and
3. point out the reasons for such phenomenon.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
审题:
这道题包含两幅对比鲜明的图画,指令要求在描述图画后阐明含义并给出该现象的原因。我们应该这样来构造全文:第一段描述图画;第二段发表自己对图画的看法;第三段给出该现象的原因;第四段下结论,简要提出解决问题的办法。经过学习之后,大家就会知道这是一个极为重要的模式,请大家用心掌握。
Sample:
As is depicted by the two pictures, a sharp contrast is shaped between the parents and the son. In the left drawing, the parents are working hard in the field, bending over and sweating heavily. Near them is a basket with very simple food in it. However, in the right drawing, their son is squandering the money on luxurious food and chatting on mobile phone.
How pitiful the parents are! They spare no efforts to earn money in order to support their son’s study and life in university. They seem to be willing to do everything that is helpful to their beloved son. But, in return, the son spends the money as he likes without knowing how hard his parents work for it and how he should use it to better prepare himself for future career.
In my opinion, the reasons for this phenomenon come down to one essential point—failure of both family and school education. For one thing, quite a lot of Chinese parents spoil their children. All parents’ love for children is the same, but different is the way of showing it. Many parents hope too much that their children will have a bright future, which, in their eyes, means key universities, hot majors, good salaries and so on. So they try their best to satisfy the children’s demands instead of teaching them to struggle for future with their own hands. For another, centered on exam marks, the school education also fails, to a large extent, to impart moral standards to the children, especially the conception of selfreliance and hard struggle.
In a word, to change the phenomenon described by the above pictures, a reform in our current education system is not only necessary but urgent.
点评:
第一段的重点是在描述时突出两幅图画之间强烈的反差,所以这里专门加上了第一句话。这一段在用词上也很考究。第二段强烈地表达了自己的感想。首句使用了感叹句。而后先说父母竭尽全力挣钱供孩子读书,后说孩子不知父母辛苦,不懂得如何正确利用父母的血汗钱。第三段给出了该现象的原因——家庭和学校教育的失败,而后分为两方面来说,结构极为清晰。最后一段只有一句话,掷地有声——要想改变现状,只能改革当前的教育体系。
心得:
全文一气呵成,读来倍感畅快。从描述图画,到发表评论,到给出原因,再到解决办法,可谓浑然一体。既有全局的考虑,又有细微处语言的运用,该文值得大家细细品味。
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the two pictures,
2. interpret their meaning, and
3. point out the reasons for such phenomenon.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
审题:
这道题包含两幅对比鲜明的图画,指令要求在描述图画后阐明含义并给出该现象的原因。我们应该这样来构造全文:第一段描述图画;第二段发表自己对图画的看法;第三段给出该现象的原因;第四段下结论,简要提出解决问题的办法。经过学习之后,大家就会知道这是一个极为重要的模式,请大家用心掌握。
Sample:
As is depicted by the two pictures, a sharp contrast is shaped between the parents and the son. In the left drawing, the parents are working hard in the field, bending over and sweating heavily. Near them is a basket with very simple food in it. However, in the right drawing, their son is squandering the money on luxurious food and chatting on mobile phone.
How pitiful the parents are! They spare no efforts to earn money in order to support their son’s study and life in university. They seem to be willing to do everything that is helpful to their beloved son. But, in return, the son spends the money as he likes without knowing how hard his parents work for it and how he should use it to better prepare himself for future career.
In my opinion, the reasons for this phenomenon come down to one essential point—failure of both family and school education. For one thing, quite a lot of Chinese parents spoil their children. All parents’ love for children is the same, but different is the way of showing it. Many parents hope too much that their children will have a bright future, which, in their eyes, means key universities, hot majors, good salaries and so on. So they try their best to satisfy the children’s demands instead of teaching them to struggle for future with their own hands. For another, centered on exam marks, the school education also fails, to a large extent, to impart moral standards to the children, especially the conception of selfreliance and hard struggle.
In a word, to change the phenomenon described by the above pictures, a reform in our current education system is not only necessary but urgent.
点评:
第一段的重点是在描述时突出两幅图画之间强烈的反差,所以这里专门加上了第一句话。这一段在用词上也很考究。第二段强烈地表达了自己的感想。首句使用了感叹句。而后先说父母竭尽全力挣钱供孩子读书,后说孩子不知父母辛苦,不懂得如何正确利用父母的血汗钱。第三段给出了该现象的原因——家庭和学校教育的失败,而后分为两方面来说,结构极为清晰。最后一段只有一句话,掷地有声——要想改变现状,只能改革当前的教育体系。
心得:
全文一气呵成,读来倍感畅快。从描述图画,到发表评论,到给出原因,再到解决办法,可谓浑然一体。既有全局的考虑,又有细微处语言的运用,该文值得大家细细品味。
其实很多人都喜欢在考试前做大量的真题和预测题,但是这样效果明显吗?我之前考研也是随大流这样复习,考了两年都考不上,考到我都绝望了。第三年顶不住压力,报了ABC天下英语培训。因为我基础不好,所以他们推荐我可以考虑他们的组合课程,中籍老师 + 欧美老师,1个月中教老师培养基本单词、音标、语法、考研技巧,然后再给欧美老师训练标准口语及思维方式。这教学效果目前学起来是很不错,所以你也可以选择采用中教和欧美外教共同上课的方式,以外教为主,中教辅助,可以参考看看吧.!!我那个欧美老师真的很专业,教给我很多复习的方法。那一刻开始我才知道我之前的复习方法是多么的可笑,简直就是白费力。原本只是打算考个二本院校的研究生,后来有了专业老师的帮助,我考上了华南师范大学的研究生。强烈呼吁不要再跟个傻子一样拼命地做题了。如果是零基础,建议找欧美外教1对1学标准口语,打好基础是最快最有效果的,如果和口音不标准的外教学偏了,以后要调整就更麻烦了。附上那时候的上课计划表!
ABC天下英语学员:Linda的上课计划表
考研口语 ▏1星期3堂55(分/m) ▏半年80堂课数 ▏中国Honey教师 美国John教师 ▏研究生英语4 书本 ▏
顺便说一下,其实你可以到各个学习讥构去咨询了解仔细对比后再做选择,如此才能选择最时候自己的英语辅导讥构。我现在在他们家学的好认真的,可以进行视频教学,中外教都有。希望可以帮到你。总之,再重复强调,要将英语口语学标准,这取决于外教资质,纯正欧美口音(非东南亚)非常重要,否则学错口音要改正就更困难了,一定要多试听来比较。如果可以的话,你也可以自己安排去我学习的那家机构,和美籍老师测一下目前的英语水平,根据目前的水平,好为你自己安排适合的教程以及寻找合适的老师以及补习班。
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